Graduation 2012

Mr. Romero, could you please grade me on my introduction and my conclusion. thanks -- briana c.


What motivates you to keeping moving on successfully in life? A couple of people may have the same motivation, but not all are the same. To help me graduate in the year 2012, i have a few things that really motivates me to keep pushing forward. My motivations are, my family, my talents for school, and my determination.

First of all, my family helps me stay focus and everything! No matter what i decide my mom may have her opinions, but at the end she really makes me realize what's right and what's the right choice. Just hearing her say, "you better graduate, you don't want to see the outcome later", really makes me want to do better than great. I really don't want my niece and nephew and the rest of the family see me fail at succeeding, at all.

Second, your talents in school will really take anyone far. Always paying attention, focusing on the current things that could really change people's lives for the better. Being extremely intelligent can take anyone far in life. If their best efforts are given when shown their talents, then everything should work out.

Lastly, determination is really important. No determination means no will-power. That just means that people just doesn't want bigger and better things for themselves. Determination shows that there's passion about making a life worth living and successful.

In conclusion, people have different things that motivates them on to a successful life. So, what makes you move forward in life? What's make you push on even though you may not to? My family, my talents for school, and my determination really makes me want to graduate in the year 2012. It even makes me want to do much more for myself.